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Yes, the photos he used were very appropriate and arranged. He used pictures of a mouth skull to show an example how the width of the mouth expended due to our die. The pictures shows the difference between 1940s to prehistoric. The text explains the pictures well. The text explains how we changed our diet […]

The thesis of this essay seems to be placed towards the end of the introduction paragraph, after explaining what breast implants are and their medical complexities, which seems appropriately placed. The writer gives sufficient evidence to back the argument throughout the essay, including “…research showed that silica gel has a significant effect on the immune […]

    Ryuto Nakayama English 101 Holly Peppa April 23, 2021     Pietrangelo, Ann. “The Effects of Stress on Your Body.” Https://Www.healthline.com/Health/Stress/Effects-on-Body, 29 Mar. 2020. The reason I chose this picture is because this shows what stress can do to your body. Stress can do a serious damage to your body. You could get […]

I am looking forward for the essay 4 which is photo essay. For ideas of what Pictures I am going to find. I will be forcing on trying to find photos that have something to do with family stress, because that is what my essay 3 is on. I am going to find pictures that […]

Ryuto Nakayama Holly Peppa English 101 April 18, 2021   Research paper Essay 3   There are several factors of stress in adult lives. This includes money, relationship, work, life. In my opinion, most of the new generations are stressed about their parents and the pressures that they place on them. Today I am going […]

My main section of argument will do about how immigrant parents cause their kids to stress and on the side of that I am going to write and include what is the main cause of stress, what stress can do to people, what is actually stress, and how can you relieve stress. the additional information […]